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Decoding Grade 11 Essay Tasks: Topic, Purpose, Audience and Task Verbs

1.1About 65 minutes
Learning goals
  • I can identify the topic, purpose and audience of a Grade 11 essay task, including what it asks for indirectly.
  • I can explain exactly what task verbs such as analyze, compare, evaluate, argue and to what extent require.
  • I can describe the academic audience and the constraints (length, sources, time, criteria) of an essay task.
  • I can restate any essay prompt as a clear planning question before I start.

Words to know

rhetorical situation
Everything that shapes a piece of writing: the writer, the audience, the purpose, the topic and form, and the context it is written in.
task verb
The word in a prompt that names the thinking you must do, such as analyze, compare, evaluate or argue.
academic audience
An intelligent reader who knows the text or topic, expects a formal, evidence-based argument and wants to learn something from your thinking.
qualified position
A claim that answers how far something is true, with limits, rather than a flat yes or no.
constraint
A limit set by the task: length, time, number or kind of sources, format, due date.
implicit requirement
Something a task expects without saying it directly, such as a thesis in a literary essay.

Same prompt, two different essays

Two students get the same prompt: Analyze how the speaker of a poem uses imagery to develop its central idea.

The first student writes four pages explaining what happens in the poem, stanza by stanza. The second student writes three pages arguing one claim about how the imagery works, with quotations and explanation in every paragraph. Both worked hard. Only the second one did the task.

The difference started before either of them wrote a word. The second student decoded the prompt: analyze means take apart and explain how the parts create meaning, not retell. In Grade 11 University English, most of your writing marks come from essays, and many of the marks you lose come from answering a slightly different question than the one you were asked. This lesson is about reading a task the way your teacher wrote it.

Remember from Grade 10

In the Grade 10 Writing unit you identified topic, purpose, audience and form, found the task word in a prompt, and planned with RAFT (Role, Audience, Format, Topic). Grade 11 prompts are longer and more open, and they often expect things they do not say aloud. This lesson adds precise meanings for task verbs, the academic audience, and the implicit requirements of essays.

The rhetorical situation

Every piece of writing sits inside a rhetorical situation. Before you plan an essay, you should be able to name each part:

  • Writer: your role and stance. In a literary essay you are a critic making an argument about a text. In an argumentative essay you are an advocate for a position.
  • Audience: who will read it and what they already know.
  • Purpose: what the writing must do: analyze, argue, explain, compare, evaluate, persuade.
  • Topic and form: what you are writing about and the shape it must take (literary essay, argumentative essay, op-ed, report).
  • Context: the conditions around the task: word count, time limit, number and kind of sources, the rubric, the due date.

Change any one of these and the right piece of writing changes too.

The rhetorical situation of an essayWRITERyou: role and stanceAUDIENCEwho reads, what they knowPURPOSEanalyze, argue, explain...TOPIC + FORMwhat, in which shapeCONTEXT (around everything): length, time, sources, marking criteria
The writer, audience and purpose pull on each other, and the topic and form sit in the middle. Context (length, time, sources, criteria) surrounds every essay you write.

Task verbs: what the prompt is really asking

The task verb tells you what kind of thinking earns marks. These are the most common in Grade 11:

Task verbWhat it requiresA common mistake
AnalyzeTake the text or issue apart and explain how the parts create meaning or effect.Retelling the plot or listing devices without effects.
ExplainMake clear why or how something happens, with reasons and evidence.Describing what without why.
Compare / contrastShow similarities and/or differences and what they reveal.Two separate mini-essays with no links.
Evaluate / assessJudge quality or effectiveness against criteria, with evidence.Giving an opinion with no criteria (I liked it).
Argue / defend / justifyTake a clear, debatable position and prove it, answering objections.Sitting on the fence, or ignoring the other side.
DiscussExplore an issue from more than one angle and reach a reasoned view.Listing views with no conclusion.
To what extent / how farGive a qualified position: how much is true, and where it stops being true.A flat yes or no.
Grade 11 task verbs. Underline the verb in every prompt before you do anything else.

The academic audience

Unless a task names a different reader, an essay in Grade 11 English is written for an academic audience. Picture an intelligent reader who:

  • has read the text (so you do not need to retell it), but has not thought about it the way you have;
  • expects a formal, clear voice, a thesis, and evidence for every claim;
  • is open to persuasion but will notice weak reasoning, vague words and padding;
  • reads to learn something from your interpretation.

Writing for this reader solves many problems at once. You skip summary because they already know the story. You define a term only when it matters. You explain why a quotation matters, because they can already see what it says.

Implicit requirements

Some requirements are never written in the prompt because your teacher expects you to know them. In a Grade 11 essay you are almost always expected to:

  1. state an arguable thesis, usually at the end of the introduction;
  2. support every claim with specific evidence (quotations for literature; facts, examples or expert testimony for arguments);
  3. explain how the evidence proves the claim;
  4. write in the literary present tense for literary essays and in a formal register;
  5. cite sources correctly (you will practise MLA citation in the sibling unit Writing: Research, Forms and Conventions).

If you are unsure whether something is expected, ask. Asking Do you want us to deal with a counterargument? is a sign of a careful writer, not a confused one.

Anatomy of a Grade 11 essay prompt“To what extent does the speaker of ‘In Flanders Fields’ present thewar as a cause worth continuing? Write a 1,000-word literary essay foran academic audience, supported by at least four embedded quotations.”TASK VERBTo what extent: take a qualified position (how far, not yes or no)TOPIC + FOCUSthe speaker's presentation of the war in one poemFORMliterary essay: thesis, body paragraphs, conclusionAUDIENCEacademic: has read the poem, expects formal analysisCONSTRAINTSabout 1,000 words; at least 4 embedded quotations
One prompt, five parts. The verb to what extent asks for a qualified position, and the constraints tell you how much evidence the essay must carry.

Turn the prompt into a planning question

After decoding, rewrite the prompt as one question you can answer in one sentence. That sentence becomes your working thesis. Prompt: Evaluate the effectiveness of the school's new phone policy. Planning question: By which criteria is the policy effective, and where does it fall short?

Worked example

Let's decode a full prompt together

Decode this prompt, then write a planning question: To what extent does the speaker of "In Flanders Fields" present the war as a cause worth continuing? Write a 1,000-word literary essay for an academic audience, supported by at least four embedded quotations.

  1. Task verb: to what extent. I need a qualified position: the poem might present the war as worth continuing in some ways but not in others.
  2. Topic and focus: the speaker (the Dead) and how they present the war, in one poem. Not McCrae's life, and not the war's history.
  3. Purpose: analyze and argue. The essay must prove an interpretation.
  4. Form: literary essay: an introduction with a thesis, body paragraphs organized around claims, a conclusion.
  5. Audience: academic. They know the poem, so no stanza-by-stanza summary. Formal voice, present tense.
  6. Constraints: about 1,000 words (so an introduction, three or four body paragraphs and a conclusion); at least four embedded quotations (blended into my sentences, not dropped in).
  7. Implicit requirements: an arguable thesis, analysis after every quotation, line citations.
  8. Planning question: How far, and in what ways, does the speaker present continuing the war as a duty, and what in the poem complicates that call?

The prompt asks for a qualified, evidence-based argument about the speaker's presentation of the war, in a formal 1,000-word literary essay with at least four embedded quotations. The planning question is: How far, and in what ways, does the speaker present continuing the war as a duty, and what complicates that call?

Hands-on activity

Prompt detective at home

You need: paper, a pen, and three real pieces of writing your household has received or used (for example, a letter or email from the school, a job posting, a form from the city, a product review, a recipe, a news article).

  1. For each one, write the writer, audience, purpose, form and one constraint (length, deadline, required information).
  2. Find one implicit requirement in each: something the writer had to include that no one wrote down (a job posting must say how to apply; a recipe must list ingredients before steps).
  3. Now invent a Grade 11-style essay prompt about one of them, using a task verb from the table (for example, Evaluate how effectively this job posting attracts qualified teenage applicants.). Decode your own prompt with the five-part method.
  4. Show a family member your planning question. Can they tell what your essay would argue?

What to look for: the purpose is a verb (inform, persuade, instruct), the audience is specific (not everyone), and the planning question can be answered in one sentence.

Just for fun

The word essay comes from the French essai, meaning an attempt or a trial. The French writer Michel de Montaigne called his collection of short reflections Essais in 1580. So technically every essay is an attempt. We do not recommend explaining this to your teacher on the due date.

Your turn

1

Underline the task verb and say what it requires: Assess the effectiveness of the ending of the novel.

2

What is the difference between compare and contrast?

3

A prompt says Discuss whether social media has improved teen friendships. Is it enough to list three views? Explain.

4

Name two things an academic audience already knows and two things it expects from you.

5

List three implicit requirements of a Grade 11 literary essay.

6

Rewrite as a planning question: Evaluate whether Ontario's public libraries should lend tools and equipment as well as books.

7

Why is To what extent is the narrator reliable? hard to answer with a simple yes or no?

More practice: warm-up

1

What are the five parts of the rhetorical situation in this lesson?

2

Which task verb asks you to judge something against criteria?

3

What tense should a literary essay use to discuss events in a text?

4

What is a constraint? Give one example.

5

Does an academic audience need a plot summary? Why or why not?

More practice: on your own

1

Decode fully (verb, topic and focus, purpose, form, audience, constraints): In a 750-word op-ed for your local newspaper, argue for or against a four-day school week in your board.

2

Explain how the op-ed above would differ from an argumentative essay on the same topic written for your teacher.

3

A student writes four paragraphs about the history of the First World War for the Flanders prompt in the example. What did they misread?

4

Write a planning question for: Analyze how the setting of a story you have studied shapes its main character.

5

Your teacher's rubric lists Thinking: insight and complexity of the thesis. What does this tell you about the implicit expectations for the thesis?

Challenge

1

Two prompts look alike: (A) Explain how the poem uses imagery. (B) Evaluate how effectively the poem uses imagery to develop its central idea. Explain how the thesis for each would differ, and write a sample thesis for B about any poem you know.

2

Rewrite this vague prompt so that its topic, purpose, audience and form are all clear: Write about climate change.

3

Explain why identifying the audience is as important as identifying the topic, using an example where the same topic needs two very different pieces of writing.

Check your understanding

Quiz

1.

A prompt asks: To what extent is the ending of the story hopeful? Which response best fits the task verb?

2.

Which task verb requires judging something against criteria?

3.

Which is an implicit requirement of a Grade 11 literary essay?

4.

The default audience for a Grade 11 English essay:

5.

A student writes a stanza-by-stanza summary for a prompt that says analyze. What went wrong?

6.

Which is part of the context of a writing task?

For parents and teachers

Big idea: Expectation 1.1 asks students to identify the topic, purpose and audience for a variety of writing tasks. In Grade 11 University English, misreading the task is one of the most common reasons a well-written essay earns a weak mark.

How to help: when your teen gets an essay assignment, ask them to read you the prompt and then tell you in their own words: What is the verb asking you to do? Who is the reader? What would a perfect answer include? If they cannot answer in one or two sentences, they are not ready to start writing yet. Encourage them to ask the teacher about anything unclear; this is a mature habit, not a weakness.

Common difficulties: treating analyze as summarize; giving a yes-or-no answer to to what extent; writing for a reader who has not read the text (too much plot); ignoring constraints such as the number of quotations or sources; forgetting implicit requirements such as a thesis.