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Grammar for Clarity: Agreement, Pronouns, Tense and Modifiers

3.4About 70 minutes
Learning goals
  • I can make subjects and verbs agree, even with phrases in between, indefinite pronouns and either/or.
  • I can make pronouns agree with clear antecedents and use the correct case (I/me, who/whom).
  • I can keep verb tense consistent, including the literary present in essays.
  • I can fix dangling and misplaced modifiers and faulty parallel structure.

Words to know

subject-verb agreement
Matching a verb to its subject in number (singular or plural).
indefinite pronoun
A pronoun such as everyone, each, someone or nobody that does not refer to a specific person; most are singular.
antecedent
The noun that a pronoun refers to.
pronoun case
The form of a pronoun that shows its job: subject (I, she, who) or object (me, her, whom).
collective noun
A noun naming a group, such as team or committee.
tense shift
A change in verb tense; an error when it happens without a change in time.
dangling modifier
A descriptive phrase with no clear word to describe in the sentence.

Grammar is about meaning

Grammar is not a set of rules invented to catch students out. It is the system that lets readers understand exactly what you mean. Compare:

  • The coach told the player that he had made the team. (Who made the team, the coach or the player?)
  • Each of the students have their own locker... I mean has... wait.

When grammar slips, readers either misunderstand or stop trusting the writer. The Grade 10 curriculum asks you to use grammar conventions correctly and appropriately to communicate clearly and fluently. This lesson targets the errors that most often weaken high school writing.

Remember from Grade 9

In Grade 9 you studied clauses, subject-verb agreement, parallel structure, misplaced and dangling modifiers, verbals and active and passive voice. This lesson reviews the trickiest cases and adds pronoun agreement, pronoun case and reference, and consistent verb tense.

1. Subject-verb agreement: the tricky cases

A singular subject takes a singular verb (the box is); a plural subject takes a plural verb (the boxes are). The tricky part is finding the real subject.

  • Phrases in between: ignore prepositional phrases. The list of chores is long.
  • Indefinite pronouns each, every, everyone, everybody, anyone, someone, no one, nobody, either, neither are singular: Everyone has a ticket.
  • Either/or, neither/nor: the verb agrees with the closer subject: Neither the players nor the coach is ready. / Neither the coach nor the players are ready.
  • **Compound subjects with and** are plural: Maya and Theo are here.
  • Collective nouns (team, class, family, committee) are usually singular in Canadian usage when acting as one group: The team is winning.
  • Inverted sentences: find the subject after the verb: There are three reasons. / Here is the list.
Find the real subject: cross out the phrase in betweenThe boxof hockey sticksisin the garage.singular subject → singular verbprepositional phrase: ignore itEachof the playershasa helmet.each is singular → has (not have)
Cross out the phrase between the subject and the verb, then make them agree. The verb agrees with box and Each, not with sticks or players.

2. Pronouns: agreement, case and reference

Agreement. A pronoun must match its antecedent (the noun it replaces) in number. The students handed in their essays. When gender is unknown or not relevant, the **singular they** is widely accepted in Canadian writing and by MLA: Each student handed in their essay. (Some teachers prefer plural rewrites in formal essays: All students handed in their essays.)

Case. Use subject pronouns (I, he, she, we, they, who) as subjects and object pronouns (me, him, her, us, them, whom) as objects.

  • Priya and I went skating. (Test: I went skating, not me went skating.)
  • The coach gave the jerseys to Priya and me*.* (Test: gave the jerseys to me.)
  • between you and me (never between you and I).

Reference. Every pronoun must point clearly to one antecedent. Watch especially for this, that, it, which and they used to refer to a whole idea or to nothing at all: They say winters are getting shorter. Who is they? Name them.

Pronoun reference: clear or vague?VAGUE:When Amir handed Leo the puck, he smiled.who smiled? Amir or Leo?CLEAR:Amir smiled as he handed Leo the puck.he can only mean Amir
If a pronoun could point to two people, rewrite so it can only point to one, or repeat the name.

3. Consistent verb tense

Choose a tense and stay in it unless the time really changes.

  • Narratives are usually in the past tense (or consistently present).
  • Literary essays use the literary present: The narrator writes one word.
  • Shift only for a reason: The narrator writes "Yes," which reverses the cold "Ok." that began their exchange in September (began is in the past because September comes earlier in the story than the moment being discussed; when in doubt, keep everything in the present).

Unintended shifts, such as The narrator eats alone and then turned on the radio, are among the most common errors in Grade 10 essays.

4. Modifiers and parallel structure (review)

  • Dangling modifier: Skating across the pond, the ice cracked. (The ice was not skating.) Fix: Skating across the pond, we heard the ice crack.
  • Misplaced modifier: She almost ate the whole pizza vs. She ate almost the whole pizza: placement changes meaning.
  • Parallel structure: items in a list or comparison take the same form: to plan, to draft and to revise.
Worked example

Let's edit a paragraph for grammar

Edit: Everyone in the Grade 10 classes have to write the literacy test. When a student finishes, they can leave quietly. Me and my friend was nervous, but the teacher told us it would be fine. Walking into the room, the computers were already on. The test had two sessions and we finish both in one morning.

  1. Sentence 1: the subject is Everyone (singular); in the Grade 10 classes is a phrase in between. → Everyone in the Grade 10 classes has to write the literacy test.
  2. Sentence 2: a student... they uses the singular they, which is acceptable. (Alternative: When students finish, they can leave quietly.)
  3. Sentence 3: pronoun case and agreement. Test: me was nervous? No: I was. Compound subject → plural verb. → My friend and I were nervous. (Putting yourself second is polite convention.)
  4. Sentence 4: dangling modifier: the computers were not walking. → Walking into the room, we saw that the computers were already on.
  5. Sentence 5: tense shift (had... finish). The story is in the past. → The test had two sessions, and we finished both in one morning. (Also add a comma before and joining two independent clauses.)

Everyone in the Grade 10 classes has to write the literacy test. When students finish, they can leave quietly. My friend and I were nervous, but the teacher told us it would be fine. Walking into the room, we saw that the computers were already on. The test had two sessions, and we finished both in one morning.

Hands-on activity

Grammar detective at home

You need: a newspaper, flyer, cereal box or app notifications, paper, a pencil and a family member.

  1. Find five sentences in real-world writing. For each, underline the subject once and the verb twice. Do they agree?
  2. Look for a pronoun with an unclear antecedent or a dangling modifier (ads and signs are full of them). Write it down and fix it.
  3. Make a 5-question grammar quiz for a family member using the tricky cases in this lesson (indefinite pronouns, either/or, between you and me, tense shifts). Include an answer key with one-line explanations.
  4. Give the quiz. Explain any answers they miss.

What to look for: correct identification of real subjects (not words in prepositional phrases), and explanations that name the rule, not just it sounds right.

Just for fun

A sign at a cottage dock reads: Swimming in the lake, the loons are beautiful. Somewhere, a loon is very confused about why it is in a swimsuit.

Your turn

1

Choose the verb: The collection of old hockey cards (is / are) valuable.

2

Choose the verb: Neither the teachers nor the principal (was / were) surprised.

3

Fix the pronoun case: Her and me went to the library.

4

Fix the dangling modifier: After finishing the essay, the dog needed a walk.

5

Fix the tense shift in a literary essay: The narrator leaves the radio on and felt less alone.

6

Fix the vague pronoun: The city cancelled the parade, which upset people. This was a mistake.

More practice: warm-up

1

Is everyone singular or plural?

2

What is an antecedent?

3

Which is correct: between you and I or between you and me?

4

What tense do literary essays use to discuss events in a text?

5

Choose: There (is / are) many reasons to read.

More practice: on your own

1

Choose and explain: Each of the volunteers (bring / brings) a shovel.

2

Fix the agreement: A good writer always revises their work, and they check his or her citations.

3

Fix the misplaced modifier: I saw a moose driving to the cottage.

4

Choose and explain: The team (has / have) won three games in a row.

5

Fix who/whom: Who did you give the ticket to? (formal writing)

Challenge

1

Edit this paragraph for every grammar error and explain each fix: The list of volunteers who signed up were posted yesterday. Every volunteer must bring their own gloves. We should of started planning sooner. Hoping for a big turnout, the forecast called for snow. Me and the organizer was worried.

2

Write three sentences that use either/or or neither/nor correctly, one with a singular verb, one with a plural verb and one you explain.

3

Explain why consistent verb tense matters especially in a literary essay, and show a sentence where a tense shift is actually correct.

Check your understanding

Quiz

1.

Which sentence is correct?

2.

Which sentence is correct?

3.

Which sentence uses pronoun case correctly?

4.

Which sentence has a dangling modifier?

5.

Neither the students nor the teacher ___ ready.

6.

Which shows an unintended tense shift?

For parents and teachers

Big idea: Expectation 3.4 asks students to use grammar conventions correctly and appropriately to communicate clearly and fluently. Grade 10 errors usually come from tricky subjects, pronouns and tense shifts rather than basic rules.

How to help: when a sentence sounds off, ask What is the subject? Who does "he" mean? rather than correcting it yourself. The test by removing the other person trick (Sam and I went → I went) helps with pronoun case.

Common difficulties: agreement with words in a phrase instead of the subject; me and him as subjects; vague this and they; switching between past and present in essays; dangling modifiers.

Note: the singular they is accepted by MLA and widely in Canadian usage; some teachers prefer plural rewrites in formal essays, so check with your teen's teacher.