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Generating, Expanding, Exploring and Focusing Ideas

1.2About 65 minutes
Learning goals
  • I can generate many ideas using strategies such as listing, mind maps and the journalist's questions.
  • I can expand an idea with the So-what chain and the three E's.
  • I can explore an idea from different perspectives, including by believing and doubting.
  • I can focus a broad topic into a question and a working thesis.

Words to know

generate
To produce many ideas without judging them yet.
expand
To develop an idea in more depth with examples, explanations and evidence.
explore
To look at an idea from different perspectives and test it.
focus
To narrow a topic to something specific enough for the length of the task.
mind map
A diagram with a central topic and branches of related ideas.
topic ladder
A list of topics from broad to narrow, ending in a focused question.
working thesis
Your current best answer to your focused question; it may change as you research and draft.

Two kinds of stuck

Writers get stuck in two opposite ways. Sometimes the page stays blank: I have nothing to say. Other times the ideas pour out in every direction: I have too much to say and it's all over the place.

Both problems have the same cure. Good writers do not wait for inspiration. They use strategies to generate lots of ideas, expand the promising ones, explore them from different angles, and then focus on the best one. Those four verbs come straight from the Grade 10 curriculum, and they are the subject of this lesson.

Remember from Grade 9

In Grade 9 you used freewriting, looping and cubing, wrote guiding questions, and chose an angle on complex topics. Keep using them. This lesson adds new strategies and shows how to move from a broad topic to a focused working thesis you can actually write about.

1. Generate: quantity first

When you generate ideas, do not judge them yet. Aim for many ideas; you can throw some away later.

  • Listing: set a timer for five minutes and list every idea, word or question. Push past the first five obvious ones; the interesting ideas often come later.
  • Mind map (web): write the topic in the centre, draw branches for big categories, then smaller branches for details.
  • The journalist's questions: Who? What? Where? When? Why? How? Ask each one about your topic.
  • Talk it out: explain your topic aloud to someone for two minutes. Speaking often unlocks ideas you could not write.
  • Browse resources: skim a library book, a news site, a documentary or photos about the topic. Note questions they raise for you.
A mind map generates ideas fastTeens andscreen timeHealthsleep, eyesSchoolfocus, researchFriendshipgroup chatsFamily rulesphones at dinnerCreativityvideo editing, musiconlineresearch
Each branch is a possible direction for a piece of writing. The dashed branch shows how one idea (School) can grow a smaller idea of its own.

2. Expand: go deeper

An idea like screen time affects sleep is a start, not a paragraph. Expand it:

  • The "So what?" chain: write the idea, then ask So what? and answer. Ask again. Screens affect sleep. So what? Tired students struggle to focus. So what? Their marks and moods can suffer, which is why some families keep phones out of bedrooms.
  • Add the three E's: an example, an explanation and some evidence (a fact, a quotation, an experience).
  • Zoom in: pick one moment or one detail and describe it closely.

3. Explore: look from other angles

Exploring means testing your idea from different points of view before you commit.

  • Switch perspectives: who else is affected? A parent, a teacher, an employer, a younger sibling, a doctor?
  • Believe, then doubt: first list every reason your idea might be true, then every reason it might be wrong. The doubting list often becomes your counter-argument.
  • Cause and effect: what caused this? What will it lead to?
  • Interview someone: ask a family member or neighbour what they think. Real voices make writing richer (ask permission before you quote them).

4. Focus: narrow the topic

A topic like winter is far too broad for a 1000-word essay. You could write a whole library about it. To focus, climb down the topic ladder: each rung is narrower than the one above. Stop when you reach a question you can answer well in the length you have. Your answer to that question is your working thesis: your best current idea, which may change as you research and draft.

Focusing: from a topic to a working thesisWinterWinter sportsOutdoor skating rinksVolunteer-run neighbourhood rinksHow do volunteer rinks build community?Working thesis: Volunteer-run rinks build community becauseneighbours must plan, flood and share the ice together.broadnarrow
Each rung narrows the topic. The bold question is focused enough for a short essay, and the working thesis answers it with a reason the essay can develop.
Worked example

Let's go from a broad topic to a working thesis

Your teacher says: Write a 900-word informational essay about any issue connected to climate change in Canada. Use the four steps.

  1. Generate: a 5-minute list: wildfire smoke, melting permafrost, heat waves in cities, tree planting, electric buses, ice roads, flooding, maple syrup seasons, food prices, green roofs...
  2. Expand one promising idea with the So-what chain: Cities get hotter than the countryside. So what? Concrete and asphalt hold heat. So what? Heat waves are harder on older adults and people without air conditioning. So what? Some cities are adding trees and green roofs to cool neighbourhoods.
  3. Explore: who is affected? Older adults, outdoor workers, families in apartments, city planners. A doubting question: Do green roofs really cool a whole street, or only the building? (I will need to research that.)
  4. Focus down the ladder: climate change → heat in cities → ways cities cool neighbourhoods → How are Canadian cities using trees and green roofs to reduce extreme heat?
  5. Working thesis: Canadian cities are using trees and green roofs to cool their hottest neighbourhoods, but these solutions take years to grow and must reach the people most at risk.

The working thesis is narrow enough for 900 words, it explains rather than argues (it fits an informational task), and it tells me exactly what to research next.

Keep an idea bank

Start a page in a notebook or a note on your device called Idea bank. Whenever a question, image or overheard line catches your attention, add it. When a prompt says write about anything, you will never start from zero.

Hands-on activity

Ten-minute idea sprint

You need: paper, a pencil, a timer and a family member.

  1. Choose a topic from your life: your neighbourhood, a hobby, a rule at home, or something in the news.
  2. Generate (3 min): make a mind map with at least five branches.
  3. Expand (2 min): pick one branch and do a So-what chain at least three links long.
  4. Explore (3 min): ask a family member, What do you think about this? Write down one idea that you had not thought of.
  5. Focus (2 min): write a topic ladder with four rungs and finish with a question and a one-sentence working thesis.

What to look for: a mind map with real variety (not five versions of the same idea), a So-what chain where each link goes deeper, and a final question that could be answered in one essay.

Just for fun

Brainstorming rule number one: there are no bad ideas.

Brainstorming rule number two: some ideas will be quietly crossed out later, and that is fine.

Your turn

1

Which strategy uses Who? What? Where? When? Why? How?

2

Do a So-what chain with two links for: Many teens have part-time jobs.

3

Put these in order from broadest to narrowest: the Great Lakes; water; plastic pollution in Lake Ontario; pollution in the Great Lakes.

4

Name two people, other than students, whose perspective you could explore on the topic a four-day school week.

5

Why should you avoid judging ideas while you generate them?

6

What makes a working thesis "working"?

More practice: warm-up

1

What are the four verbs from the Grade 10 expectation in this lesson?

2

Where do you write the topic in a mind map?

3

True or false: a broader topic is always easier to write about.

4

Name one resource you could browse to generate ideas.

5

In the believe-then-doubt strategy, what can the doubting list become?

More practice: on your own

1

Write a topic ladder with four rungs, starting at music.

2

Expand this flat idea using the three E's: Volunteering is good for teens.

3

A student's working thesis is Social media is bad. Explain two problems and improve it.

4

You are writing about a new dog park in your neighbourhood. Use believe-then-doubt to list one reason for and one against.

5

Why might talking your ideas aloud help you write?

Challenge

1

Take the topic food and use all four steps (generate, expand, explore, focus) to reach a focused question and working thesis. Show one line for each step.

2

Explain the difference between expanding and exploring an idea, with an example of each for the topic school uniforms.

3

A student researching wildfires finds that the topic keeps growing as they read. Suggest three specific ways to narrow it and write one focused question for each.

Check your understanding

Quiz

1.

Which activity is an example of generating ideas?

2.

Which is the most focused topic?

3.

What does the So-what chain help you do?

4.

Switching to a parent's or teacher's point of view is a way to:

5.

A working thesis is:

6.

Which strategy should come last?

For parents and teachers

Big idea: Expectation 1.2 asks students to generate, expand, explore and focus ideas using a variety of strategies and resources. Teens often either freeze or write broad, list-like essays; both come from skipping these steps.

How to help: be the person your teen talks ideas through with. Ask So what? and Who else does this affect? Resist giving them the idea; ask questions instead. When a topic is huge (technology, the environment), ask Which part? Where? For whom?

Common difficulties:

  • Stopping at the first idea.
  • Topics so broad that the essay becomes a list of facts.
  • Treating the working thesis as fixed even after research shows something different.
  • Forgetting to ask permission before quoting a family member or neighbour.