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Grammar II: Pronoun Case, Number and Person, Reported Speech, Active and Passive Voice

3.4About 70 minutes
Learning goals
  • I can choose the correct pronoun case, including in compounds, comparisons and who/whom.
  • I can make pronouns agree in number and keep person consistent, including using singular they correctly.
  • I can change direct speech into reported speech with correct tense shifts.
  • I can recognize active and passive voice and choose the one that suits my purpose and audience.
  • I can explain when nonstandard grammar is used deliberately for effect.

Words to know

pronoun case
The form a pronoun takes for its job: subject (I, she, who), object (me, her, whom) or possessive (my, her, whose).
antecedent
The noun a pronoun refers to.
singular they
They/them/their used for one person whose gender is unknown or irrelevant, or for a person who uses they as their pronoun.
reported (indirect) speech
Reporting what someone said without quoting their exact words: She said that she was tired.
backshift
Moving verbs one step into the past when reporting speech (am → was, will → would).
active voice
The subject does the action: The council cut the hours.
passive voice
The subject receives the action: The hours were cut (by the council).
Standard English
The variety of English expected in formal writing; other dialects follow their own consistent rules and are not "wrong" in their own contexts.

Who did what to whom?

Mistakes were made. Notice what is missing: who made them. Politicians and companies use this sentence for a reason. Grammar is not only about being correct; it decides what your reader knows and notices.

The curriculum's examples for grammar (3.4) include pronoun case, number and person, correct verb tenses in reported dialogue, active or passive voice to suit the purpose and audience, and nonstandard grammar used deliberately for effect. This lesson covers each one.

Remember from Grade 10

In Grade 10 you practised subject-verb agreement, pronoun-antecedent agreement, clear pronoun reference (no vague this or they), consistent verb tense, the literary present for discussing texts (The narrator realizes...), and modifiers. This lesson adds case, reported speech and voice.

1. Pronoun case

  • Subject case (I, he, she, we, they, who) for subjects: She and I wrote the report.
  • Object case (me, him, her, us, them, whom) for objects of verbs and prepositions: between you and me; for Maya and me.
  • The drop test: remove the other person. With Maya and removed, Coach gave the jerseys to me sounds right; ...to I does not.
  • Comparisons: finish the sentence in your head. She is taller than I (am). I like her more than him (more than I like him) means something different from I like her more than he (does).
  • Who vs whom: answer the question with he or him. Who wrote it? (He wrote it.) To whom did you send it? (to him). In informal speech who is common everywhere; in formal writing use whom for objects.
  • Reflexive pronouns (myself, herself) only reflect a subject already in the sentence: I hurt myself. Not Send it to Jordan or myself; use me.
The drop test for pronoun caseCoach gave the jerseys to Maya and (I / me).Coach gave the jerseys to I. ✗Coach gave the jerseys to me. ✓Drop the other person and listen: the pronoun that works alone works in the pair.Subject caseI he she we they whoObject caseme him her us them whom
Drop the other person to test the case. To me sounds right alone, so to Maya and me is correct.

2. Pronoun number and person

  • Indefinite pronouns each, everyone, everybody, someone, nobody, either, neither take singular verbs: Everyone has a locker.
  • **Singular they.** For a person whose gender is unknown or irrelevant, many style guides, including MLA (9th edition), accept they: Every student should bring their own skates. Always use they for a person who uses they as their pronoun, with plural verb forms: Alex said they are coming. Rewriting in the plural is another option: All students should bring their own skates.
  • Collective nouns (team, class, council, jury) are usually singular in Canadian usage when the group acts as one: The council has made its decision.
  • Person: do not shift between one, you and I. In formal essays avoid the general you (When you read the novel, you feel...); write about readers or the reader instead.

3. Reported speech

Direct speech quotes exact words: Maya said, "I am tired." Reported (indirect) speech reports them in your own sentence, usually after a past-tense verb such as said, told, asked, explained. Then you backshift:

  • present → past: am → was; have → had
  • past or present perfect → past perfect: lost / have lost → had lost
  • will → would; can → could; may → might
  • pronouns and time words change too: I → she; today → that day; tomorrow → the next day; here → there

"I will finish the essay tomorrow," Jordan said. → Jordan said that he would finish the essay the next day.

Two exceptions: if the statement is still true, you may keep the present (The teacher said that the essay is due Friday, if it still is). And if the reporting verb is present (Jordan says), no backshift is needed.

In literary analysis, remember the literary present: The narrator says that he was afraid is fine when the narrator speaks in the past about the past; your own analysis stays in the present.

Reported speech: shift the tense back one step"I am tired."she said she was tired"I lost my key."he said he had lost his key"I will call."she said she would call"I can help."he said he could helpdirect speechreported (indirect) speech
When the reporting verb is in the past, each verb in the original moves one step further into the past.

4. Active and passive voice

In the active voice, the subject does the action: The council cut the rink hours. In the passive voice, the subject receives it, using a form of be + past participle: The rink hours were cut (by the council).

Use active voice by default: it is clearer, shorter and shows responsibility.

Use passive voice when:

  • the doer is unknown or unimportant: The rink was built in 1998.
  • you want to focus on the receiver: Three students were honoured at the assembly.
  • the conventions of a form expect it, as in many science lab reports: The solution was heated to 40 °C.

Watch the passive that hides responsibility. Mistakes were made and The decision has been taken to close the rink leave out who decided. In critical reading, this is a signal to ask who? In your own writing, name the doer when it matters.

Do not confuse passive with past tense. The council cut the hours is past tense but active. Passive needs be + past participle.

Active and passive voiceActiveThe councilcutthe rink hours.doerreceiverPassiveThe rink hourswere cut(by the council).receiverbe + past participledoer: optionalPassive voice can drop the doer entirely, which is useful or sneaky.
Passive voice moves the receiver to the front and makes the doer optional. Dropping the doer can be practical (unknown builder) or evasive (unnamed decision-maker).

5. Nonstandard grammar on purpose

The curriculum recognizes that writers sometimes use nonstandard grammar deliberately for effect:

  • Dialogue that sounds like real speech: "Me and him are going to the rink."
  • Voice in a first-person narrator, poem or song lyric.
  • Informal forms such as texts, ads and some social media posts.

Remember that dialects are not broken English: varieties of English spoken in different communities (in Newfoundland and Labrador, in the Ottawa Valley, in many First Nations communities and among many young people in cities) follow consistent rules of their own. Use them with respect, never as a joke at a community's expense. In formal writing (essays, reports, letters to officials), use Standard English, because that is what those readers expect. Moving between varieties to suit the audience is called code-switching, and skilled writers do it on purpose.

Worked example

Let's edit for case, number, speech and voice

Draft from a report: Each of the students have their own opinion. Between you and I, the survey was rushed. The results were misreported. Ms. Roy told Jordan and myself, "I will share the data tomorrow." When you look at the graph, you see a big gap.

  1. Indefinite pronoun with a singular verb: Each of the students has their own opinion. (Each is singular; singular their is accepted in MLA style. Or: All the students have their own opinions.)
  2. Case after a preposition: between you and I → between you and me. Also remove the informal aside in a formal report: The survey was conducted in a single class period, which limited responses.
  3. Passive hiding responsibility: The results were misreported → name the doer if known: Our group misreported the results in the first draft.
  4. Reflexive misuse + reported speech: Jordan and myself → Jordan and me. Reported: Ms. Roy told Jordan and me that she would share the data the next day.
  5. Shift in person: remove general you: The graph shows a large gap between the two classes.

Each of the students has their own opinion. The survey was conducted in a single class period, which limited responses. Our group misreported the results in the first draft. Ms. Roy told Jordan and me that she would share the data the next day. The graph shows a large gap between the two classes.

Hands-on activity

Spin doctor and fact-checker

You need: a newspaper, news website or flyer from home; paper; a family member.

  1. Find three passive-voice sentences in real news or official writing. For each, decide: is the doer missing? Is that reasonable or evasive? Rewrite it in the active voice.
  2. Ask a family member to tell you something they said or heard today. Write it as direct speech, then as reported speech with correct backshift.
  3. Write a two-sentence apology from a company that is evasive (passive, no doer), then a sincere version (active, names who is responsible). Read both aloud and ask which sounds more trustworthy.
  4. Write a short exchange of dialogue in which one character uses nonstandard grammar that fits their voice, and explain in one sentence why it works.

What to look for: correct identification of passive (be + past participle); reasoned judgments about missing doers; correct backshift and time words; an active apology that names the doer; dialogue that sounds natural without mocking anyone.

Just for fun

A passive-voice joke was told. Laughter was had. Nobody knows who told it, and nobody is taking responsibility.

Your turn

1

Choose: The coach chose Maya and (I / me).

2

Choose: (Who / Whom) did the principal call?

3

Correct: Everyone in the class have finished their essay.

4

Change to reported speech: Sam said, "I can't come today."

5

Active or passive? The essay was marked by Ms. Roy.

6

Is The council cut the budget passive because it is in the past tense?

7

Rewrite to avoid the general you: When you read the poem, you feel the cold.

More practice: warm-up

1

Choose: between you and (I / me)

2

Is each singular or plural?

3

What is the passive form made of?

4

Backshift will.

5

Choose: She is faster than (I / me) in formal writing.

More practice: on your own

1

Correct every pronoun error: Him and me went to the library, but the librarian told Jordan and myself it was closed.

2

Change to reported speech: Priya asked, "Will the rink open tomorrow?"

3

When is the passive the better choice? Explain with an example.

4

Rewrite the evasive sentence in the active voice, naming a likely doer: It has been decided that the field trip is cancelled.

5

A student's story has a character from a fishing village say, "We was out past the point when the fog come in." Should the teacher correct it? Explain.

Challenge

1

Explain the difference in meaning between I trust you more than her and I trust you more than she.

2

Rewrite this paragraph from a lab report in the passive voice where the conventions call for it, and explain why: I poured 100 mL of water into a beaker. Then I heated it to 40 °C. I measured the temperature every minute.

3

Find (or invent) an official apology that uses passive voice to avoid responsibility, then explain how a critical reader should respond and rewrite it honestly.

Check your understanding

Quiz

1.

Which is correct?

2.

Which uses whom correctly?

3.

"I have finished," she said. in reported speech is:

4.

Which sentence is in the passive voice?

5.

Which is the best reason to use the passive voice?

6.

Which sentence is correct in formal writing?

7.

Nonstandard grammar is most appropriate in:

For parents and teachers

Big idea: expectation 3.4 includes pronoun case, number and person, correct verb tenses in reported dialogue, active and passive voice, and nonstandard grammar used deliberately. These choices affect both correctness and how honest and clear writing feels.

How to help: play spot the passive with news headlines and official announcements: Who did it? Model the drop test when someone says between you and I (gently!).

Common difficulties:

  • Between you and I, Jordan and myself.
  • Plural verbs after each or everyone.
  • Forgetting to backshift tenses and time words in reported speech.
  • Thinking any past-tense sentence is passive.
  • Shifting into you in formal essays.

If your family speaks a dialect of English or another language at home, that is a strength. Talk with your teen about how writers switch between ways of speaking for different audiences.